He felt himself almost in heaven,
when he saw those deep-expressive-soft eyes,
watching him with a delightful smile.
She was looking so stunning and vivacious.
A magnetic pull forced him to change his place beside her.
To his surprise…..
She was still watching the same place.
….
.
.
.
She was blind.
Message-Light up a life, Please Donate your Eyes.. :)
* A short-break from blogging world; See you soon :)
32 comments:
Good One Amit!
shilpa
Thats a great one.
Amit rocks as usual.
excellent..
I liked the feelings behind this..
Hey amit, where's the topic?!
You expressed it very well!!
I loved it!!
Great message u left!!
BREAK FROM BLOGGING WORLD???!! WHY RE???
@ Shilpa..
Thanks a lot... :)
cheers!!
@ IP
Thanks a lot...
Glad that u liked it.. :)
Cheers!!
@ RSV
Thanks a lot.. :)
Glad that u liked it..
Cheers!!
@ Shruti..
Thanks a lot..
Title of this post " Beautiful Eyes'
Forgot to mention... :)
Glad that u liked it.. :)
My short-break is very short, just 2-3 days...:)
Cheers!!!
A moving post. Keep it up!!!
a cause elegantly put :)
gr8 post Amit :)
keep blogging :)
cheers!!!
Wow! That was very good. And at the same time very unexpected. Didn't expect the end at all:)
u jus reminded me of 1 short story called the "the eyes have it" by mark twain i think.. read it way back in 10th standard cbse.. thanks for bringin in the memories.. n nice message btw..
Wow..... its touching and impacting.....ten out of ten.....
simply superb....sublime and solace..
:)
A very good 55 amith..good going...
Hey this is a nice one.Atleast the suspense element is pretty much reserved till the end. :)
To create a particular mood & interest in 55 fiction is not so easy since the story is supposed to be so short.But this one was one of the best I've read.
Good one :)
Be back soon :)
first time here...:)
one word for yr post:
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L:)
As usual,beautifully written.
simply funny ...
Nice... with a twist in the tale, too! Great going!!
P.S. Here's also wishing you a very Happy Engineer's Day... !!!
very touching ....feel the importance of eyes.. great..
hey!!collect your award from my blog.take care
Absolute fantastic. Very nice and touching poem. Excellent.
check out ma recent fiction story!!
Thanks a lot to all... :)
I am really feeling gr8 by ur encouraging words..:)
Keep visiting... :)
Cheers!!
happi b'day bro....
@ Roshmi .... And... R S V
Thanks a lot.. :)
Really feeling gr8 :
I did not expect that you would remember it.. :)
Cheers Dear!!
Belated Happy B'day!!
Wishing you the best of everything.
=)
Thanks a ton :)
Cheers Dear!!
Hi amit...
You believe it or not...still i did not find words to appreciate this elegant piece of writing....
Hats off buddy.....
Thanks a ton Mahesh... :)
Really I am overwhelmed by ur comment... :)
Cheers!!
Amit
I wish I could write as well as U write! U were so thoughtful in this particular 55fiction.
Simply loved it!
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