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Helpless Smile: 55-Fiction#5






A beautiful-sunny morning
Children were running, playing and enjoying
in the cool-breezy-aromatic air
Her soft-tempting eyes were moving...
Suddenly an elderly voice sprouted into air
Come on, Girl! Run and play with these children
She looked behind the bench and with
a helpless-feeble smile, lifted up her crutches...




Message...
Polio free India-Let’s deliver!
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Bharathi said…
so sad. Nice 55 fiction though.
November 6, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Yayaver said…
so nice and heart breaking...
November 6, 2009 at 4:04 PM
Shruti said…
AWESOME is the only word from me :)
November 6, 2009 at 4:53 PM
divsi said…
Sad heartwrenchin but very nicely written:)kudos!
November 6, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Mahesh Aadhya Kalal said…
Touching !!!!!!!

thats it.:)
November 6, 2009 at 6:11 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@Bharathi
Thanks a lot ... :)



@ Yayaver
Thank you very much.. :)
November 6, 2009 at 10:48 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@Shruti
Thanks a lot.. :)


@Divsi..
Thanks a lot.. :)
November 6, 2009 at 10:50 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@ Mahesh..
Thanks buddy..:)


@RSV
Thanks buddy
but I can't decode your comment.. :)
November 6, 2009 at 10:57 PM
Durga Nandan said…
nice one.. actually, touching..
:)
DN
November 6, 2009 at 11:18 PM
BK Chowla, said…
A very touching post.
November 7, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Anonymous said…
I like all your 55 fiction :)conveys so much in small form , and the most of I like in your fictions is your way of conveying the meassge ! Hats off :)
November 7, 2009 at 7:14 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@Durga Nandan
Thanks a lot... :)
Glad that u liked it..
Cheers!!
November 7, 2009 at 10:35 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@Roshmi
Thanks a lot..
cheers!!
November 7, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@Chowla ji
Thanks a lot.. :)
November 7, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Amit Kumar Singh said…
@adreamygal
Thanks a lot for your encouraging comment..:)
Welcome to my blog..
thanks for following me.. :)
Keep visiting
Cheers!!
November 7, 2009 at 10:39 PM
MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said…
Beautiful 55F. It did not trade the content for the post length. Beautifully done Amit !
November 10, 2009 at 1:45 AM
Musings of a lonely traveler said…
The last word is the total essence of this fiction....I wonder how creative your thoughts are...Good work Amit :)
November 10, 2009 at 9:39 AM
The Literary Jewels said…
The poem was very touching...
I am glad to have visited your blog. Keep it up!
November 21, 2009 at 10:48 PM
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