Friday, November 6, 2009

Helpless Smile: 55-Fiction#5






A beautiful-sunny morning
Children were running, playing and enjoying
in the cool-breezy-aromatic air
Her soft-tempting eyes were moving...
Suddenly an elderly voice sprouted into air
Come on, Girl! Run and play with these children
She looked behind the bench and with
a helpless-feeble smile, lifted up her crutches...




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20 comments:

Bharathi said...

so sad. Nice 55 fiction though.

Yayaver said...

so nice and heart breaking...

Shruti said...

AWESOME is the only word from me :)

divsi said...

Sad heartwrenchin but very nicely written:)kudos!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

Touching !!!!!!!

thats it.:)

RSV said...

:P

Singh Amit said...

@Bharathi
Thanks a lot ... :)



@ Yayaver
Thank you very much.. :)

Singh Amit said...

@Shruti
Thanks a lot.. :)


@Divsi..
Thanks a lot.. :)

Singh Amit said...

@ Mahesh..
Thanks buddy..:)


@RSV
Thanks buddy
but I can't decode your comment.. :)

Durga Nandan said...

nice one.. actually, touching..
:)
DN

Roshmi Sinha said...

Heart touching...

BK Chowla said...

A very touching post.

adreamygal said...

I like all your 55 fiction :)conveys so much in small form , and the most of I like in your fictions is your way of conveying the meassge ! Hats off :)

Singh Amit said...

@Durga Nandan
Thanks a lot... :)
Glad that u liked it..
Cheers!!

Singh Amit said...

@Roshmi
Thanks a lot..
cheers!!

Singh Amit said...

@Chowla ji
Thanks a lot.. :)

Singh Amit said...

@adreamygal
Thanks a lot for your encouraging comment..:)
Welcome to my blog..
thanks for following me.. :)
Keep visiting
Cheers!!

MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said...

Beautiful 55F. It did not trade the content for the post length. Beautifully done Amit !

Musings of a lonely traveler said...

The last word is the total essence of this fiction....I wonder how creative your thoughts are...Good work Amit :)

Amritbir Kaur said...

The poem was very touching...
I am glad to have visited your blog. Keep it up!