A beautiful-sunny morning
Children were running, playing and enjoying
in the cool-breezy-aromatic air
Her soft-tempting eyes were moving...
Suddenly an elderly voice sprouted into air
Come on, Girl! Run and play with these children
She looked behind the bench and with
a helpless-feeble smile, lifted up her crutches...
Message...
Polio free India-Let’s deliver!
Hit hard, make dream a reality!
20 comments:
so sad. Nice 55 fiction though.
so nice and heart breaking...
AWESOME is the only word from me :)
Sad heartwrenchin but very nicely written:)kudos!
Touching !!!!!!!
thats it.:)
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but I can't decode your comment.. :)
nice one.. actually, touching..
:)
DN
Heart touching...
A very touching post.
I like all your 55 fiction :)conveys so much in small form , and the most of I like in your fictions is your way of conveying the meassge ! Hats off :)
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Beautiful 55F. It did not trade the content for the post length. Beautifully done Amit !
The last word is the total essence of this fiction....I wonder how creative your thoughts are...Good work Amit :)
The poem was very touching...
I am glad to have visited your blog. Keep it up!
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