Wednesday, September 2, 2009

55 fiction: My 2nd Attempt





Mom, Run! Dad has got some problem.
He is trembling and is about to faint”
The ten year child yelled in an anxious voice.
"Mom! Dad has caught a paper in his hand.”
“Paper, Oh! Dear, don’t worry”
  “I have not expected!
They will deliver my diamond necklace so soon.”

25 comments:

jamos jhalla said...

It is because DIAMONDS are for ever. HHHHHaaaaa

Shruti said...

Amit!!
Awesome...
loved it so much... i ended up laughing after reading the last line!!
Damn Cute 55Fiction!

Roshmi Sinha said...

Ha! Ha!

A nice twist in the tale...

Singh Amit said...

@ Jhalla Ji
thanks a lot...
glad that u liked it... :)
cheers!!

Singh Amit said...

@ Shruti...
thanks a lot..
really happy to know that u liked it..
cheers!!

@Roshmi
:)
Thanks a lot.. :)
glad that I made u laugh
cheers!!

Indian Pundit said...

That a great one.

Hahahaha.......

Diamonds are forever.

So is the male sufferings......haha

Bharathi said...

I normally understand 55 fictions only after seeing an explanation but I understood this one at one shot. (may be beacause I am married :-)

Shilpa said...

Lol...Poor fella...

Singh Amit said...

@ Bharathi..

thanks a lot.. :)
Is it so..u made me scared by marriage... Ha ha ha ha :)

cheers!!

Singh Amit said...

@ Shilpa..

Thanks a lot :)

cheers!!

DN - On a siesta. said...

I reallly loved this one. [:D]
Was grinning after I read it. :)
Cheerz!!
Nice one!!
DN

Singh Amit said...

@ DN

Thanks a lot.... :)
feeling gr8 that I made u laugh...... :)
Waiting for ur new post... :)

cheers!!

Indian Pundit said...

Abbey, u forgot to reply to my comment.....hahaha

Just joking.

Thanks for spreading smiles all around.

Singh Amit said...

@IP....
Just I was replying ur comment on my previous post...

Thanks a lot...dear....

Ur comments always encourage me.... :)

cheers :)

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

hha ... i thought it's serious ... heheeh :) bt it was so much fun :)
u guys alwaz make fun of women n shoppin huh :P
nice attempt :)

BK Chowla said...

Frankly,it takes me long to understand fiction 55.This one was not so easy but wasn't difficult either.Now I am confident.
It was fun reading this post.

Shankar said...

very funny one..amit...great going buddy...

Singh Amit said...

@http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com

thanks a lot.. :)..
shopping!!..fun for us..but problem for married one.... :)

@Chowla Ji..

thanks..really very happy.. my post boosted ur confidence.... :)

@Shankar..
Thanks a lot... :)

cheers!!!

Shruti said...

check out my recent post amit!

Sat_hi_sh said...

lolz.......
this was the best 55-fiction i ever read :)


keep blogging :)
cheers!!

btw check out my new post & leave ur comments Amit :)

Singh Amit said...

Thanks a lot Sathish... :)

ur comment is so encouraging.... :)

cheers!!

Babli said...

Lovely post. I liked it very much. Its true that diamond is forever.

Singh Amit said...

Thanks Babli... :)

cheers!!

anushree said...

damn....poor chap!
lovely....sure this one wud hv made many ppl laugh.

Singh Amit said...

Thanks a lot Anushree... :)

cheers!!