55 fiction: My 2nd Attempt
“Mom, Run! Dad has got some problem.
He is trembling and is about to faint”
The ten year child yelled in an anxious voice.
"Mom! Dad has caught a paper in his hand.”
“Paper, Oh! Dear, don’t worry”
“I have not expected!
They will deliver my diamond necklace so soon.”
Comments
Awesome...
loved it so much... i ended up laughing after reading the last line!!
Damn Cute 55Fiction!
A nice twist in the tale...
thanks a lot...
glad that u liked it... :)
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thanks a lot..
really happy to know that u liked it..
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@Roshmi
:)
Thanks a lot.. :)
glad that I made u laugh
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Hahahaha.......
Diamonds are forever.
So is the male sufferings......haha
thanks a lot.. :)
Is it so..u made me scared by marriage... Ha ha ha ha :)
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Thanks a lot :)
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Was grinning after I read it. :)
Cheerz!!
Nice one!!
DN
Thanks a lot.... :)
feeling gr8 that I made u laugh...... :)
Waiting for ur new post... :)
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Just joking.
Thanks for spreading smiles all around.
Just I was replying ur comment on my previous post...
Thanks a lot...dear....
Ur comments always encourage me.... :)
cheers :)
It was fun reading this post.
thanks a lot.. :)..
shopping!!..fun for us..but problem for married one.... :)
@Chowla Ji..
thanks..really very happy.. my post boosted ur confidence.... :)
@Shankar..
Thanks a lot... :)
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this was the best 55-fiction i ever read :)
keep blogging :)
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btw check out my new post & leave ur comments Amit :)
ur comment is so encouraging.... :)
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lovely....sure this one wud hv made many ppl laugh.
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